Neerav D.
predictable and dragged, could have been a 10 page short story. lots of typos too. not worth wasting your time
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Suresh Patel
it's a very nice story. I loved it. One suggestion: if you do not provide headings to all chapters, it will be more suitable as title tell story before we read it. 🙏🙏Please, it's suggestion only but nice work keep continue 👏
Thakkar Riya
Shu book lakhi che wah vachvani bahu j maja aavi kyak hasi majak to kyak emotional lines aa book atli saras che ke ak vaar hath ma vachva lidhi hoy to aakhi book puri karine j pachi bandh Karine rakhvanu man thay great sir great!!! Aagad pan aavi book lakhta raho avi shubhechha 👍