David Gameson
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Basic, more essay than book, but with more experience I believe the author can produce something worth the £3.98p being asked for. Do not rely on spell checker, do check online data with regards accuracy. Martial law is declared by the government, the military enforces it, that is why it is called 'Martial. Of course you could have a military coup then martial law declared.' Your character came from a backwoods, not backwards, planet...' . There is more but nice attempt. Best wishes and good luck as an author. David (ex-Army)
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Eric Pearson
I like the story and the previous one in the series before it, but paying $5 for 60 pages is ridiculous. I can't justify paying that much for so little, especially with so many other books out there for less with 5 times the amount of pages! To the author: love the story arch, will not be falling into this 6 chapter paywall scam.