Eric Durham
I like this genre of books, going back to the old Iceberg Slim novels. This was a take off on it, and reasonably well done, but books with spelling errors really get on my nerves. Couldn't they afford a spellchecker? Plus the fact that it was a continued story made me even more irritated. The book was OK, but not good enough to make me go searching for part 2.
3 people found this review helpful
Rosensmith
Long, long, LONG story about street life dope dealers.The grammar is unbelievably bad. The plot is not believable at all. The mistakes in grammar, punctuation and the whole story line would have been helped by a good editor. Why would anyone publish this Garbage that COULD HAVE BEEN a REAL book? I couldn't even finish the first time. When I picked it up again, I painfully got through half the book. I asked myself, "why are you wasting Time on this piece of crap? Skip to the end." WHAT NO ENDING? DON'T BUY!
12 people found this review helpful
Maurika Smith
The spelling, punctuation, and grammar mistakes (along with horrible sentence structuring) made this a below average read. The plot was good, but the ending was horrible and after reading this book I for sure don't want to read the second one to find out what happens next. The author need to get a professional editor to edit this and his/her other works.
9 people found this review helpful