W Holte
great story, difficulty reading with all the incorrect words used, and grammar errors. English is a difficult language. The author uses large words that don't make sense in the context. I liked the story, but a lot of the big words used are not proper words or are used incorrectly in context.
Sian Pearson
I thought the premise was interesting, however I gave up after a few pages as the writing and grammar were so poor I struggled to make sense of the book. If this book has been translated from another language, the author should get his money back from whoever was responsible for the translation.
Geneo Brown
yeah! i did kinda like this. it was a bit difficult to follow the language sometimes. but, thank you....