My True Mate: Book 1

There are some deft additions to Wolf Shifter lore which will, hopefully, be explored in the follow-up books. Fated Mates are always a powerful concept although I've seen it done better by other writers. My enjoyment was severely marred by the appalling errors that littered almost every single page. Ridiculous spelling mistakes, bizarre word salad cropping up & endless grammatical mistakes which, on occasion made the actual meaning of a passage unclear without careful re-examination. Despite all of the above, the ideas still hold some merit. The quality control of either the editor or in-house bot is subpar. Of the two, I believe that this is a poor bot led enterprise but surely, if you're going to put your name on something read through it at least once to catch the worst of the mistakes.

Wow! I am at a loss for words. Bella Lore, you really know how to write a engaging story plot with such relatable characters, and that's what makes you one of my favourite authors! I loved the book, the way you you built up your plot and developed your characters is unbelievably beautiful! The reason I gave it four stars and not five is because of the spelling mistakes and improper use of grammar, but other than that, this book is definitely one of my favourites! I will definitely recommend this book to my friends and any other person that likes a good si-fi love story.

I gave this one star because the plot was remarkably clever--twisted, reasonable, and surprising. However if anyone appoaching high school editing skills ever got within 6ft of this manuscript, they should be stripped of their diploma and go back to 8th grade English under Sister Mary Perpetua. Random words pop up within reasonable sentences, irrelevant punctuation marks cause repeated rereading before the author's intent becomes apparent and the mark is. changed or, more usually, discarded. Some sentences I couldn't even decipher and just had to ignore. Reading this reminded me of trying to crack the black walnuts in my yard, a tremendous output of energy for very little product. If you like a really good story wrapped in garbage, go for it. Otherwise skip this offering.