Don't Turn Around: Volume 1

I just finished reading this book a few days ago and I absolutely loved it! The storyline is captivating, the characters are totally badass, and all in all it pulls me into the story! The only bad thing I really noticed in it was numerous spelling and grammar mistakes. Now, I don't know if that's just in my head, but I swear I've read the sentences containing the mistakes over and over again and each time they didn't make sense. But that was probably just one of a few copies that had mistakes. And that still didn't take away from how awesome the book is.

I read the actual book and it was AMAZING!!!! I loved the characters and got really sad when one of them died (you'll have to read to find out who) I'm a pretty slow reader so it took me a long time to finish it but when I did I was sooo happy and I'm getting the second book tomorrow, I hope it's just as good!!

Was reading the free excerpt of the novel and ran into this line:"She had been heading downtown to pick up a new video card for her MacBook Pro" Now, I don't normally nit pick stories but when the character saying/thinking this is described as a gifted hacker I would think the author would have put some basic effort into understanding computers (for those who don't know you can't upgrade/change a laptops CPU or GPU). Can't bring myself to keep reading the excerpt. Otherwise seemed like standard run of the mill writing but my suspension of disbelief has been irrevocably broken.