Creep

Imagining the narrative of the main character in my mind as I read, it felt flat & without much cohesion. If the story had been much longer, I probably would've lost interest & quit reading. That said, it still managed to "creep" me out bad! My spine tingles & I keep feeling the need to look over my shoulder to make sure nothing has managed to "creep" up on me.

Obviously, the way you ended it was meant for the reader to come up with their own theories. Personally, I'm not entirely sure, but I think the protagonist saw it all in her head, mainly because the guard was right behind Kelly when she stabbed her. However, I like how you left it open to the reader's interpretation. As for the way it was written, 9.9 out of 10. Mainly because I found one instance of the word "me" being used instead of "I" (and not in the "this person and me" way of using it incorrectly. That can be excused because some people really talk like that). All in all, this was a good short story. I'd recommend people to read it tbh! :)

Creep is a creepy short story sure to raise the hairs on your arms. Perfect if you want to read and complete something in less than 30 minutes!