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Hunter
The sex scene between Clementine and the authors self insert is disgusting. Clementine is a minor and the self insert is an adult. This is something that belongs on Wattpad and not for sale to the young audience this is being marketed for. Tillies using Clem's sexuality as a way to have a romance with her. which is something that the games never prioritized unlike this so called writer. why and how did this ever get approve. I truly can't believe this is what the loyal fans of the series gets.
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Dimi
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my advice to yall is to either only read the comics or only play the game...in book 2, clementine drifts off to sleep and goes to THE FRIGGIN AMISH GUY FROM THE FIRST COMIC for advice instead of Lee, A CLOSE FATHER-LIKE FIGURE. it's actually kind of sad to see clementine as a character get completely destroyed in these comics.
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Plizmo Choko
Although I have not read this work in full. But for me, Clem became not like herself, if you remember the game Clem, then she would never have left AJ. She became like a mother to me and she felt it. And it was possible to come up with a more logical beginning and the right Clem, it seems to me. Or continue AJ's story altogether. It would be much more logical and perhaps easier to start his story. In the game, Clem's story ended on a more or less happy note, she found a home and a safe place for AJ, a lot of friends. If we go back to the beginning, then I would explain Clem's departure due to psychological trauma. She went through hell as a child, she visited various camps, communities and each of them was destroyed and people dear to her died. It could affect her psyche. And not the desire to remain in the coalition. I'm not a screenwriter or anything like that. But it sounds much more logical than just "I'm not happy." And again, AJ is everything in her life for her.