Kamas Kirian
I had trouble getting into this book. The base story was fine, it was the way it was written that bothered me. I've run into this problem with other stories written around the same time. The flow of words simply doesn't strike me as quite right, it brings me out of the story. The sentences seem choppy at times, and the paragraphs seem to run on endlessly occasionally. It's a short book, more like a novella or short novel, but it still took me a week to read instead of just a single day. The story of Honey Bee and George, held in their separate worlds and educated in their discrete ways during their youth, was fine. I would have preferred it be paced better. Bee and King Loc are the only characters remotely fleshed out. The eBook was formatted well with only one noticeable spelling mistake.
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